MISPLACED AND DANGLING MODIFIERS
Rule 1. If you start a sentence with an action, place the actor immediately after.
Incorrect While walking across the street, the bus hit her.
Correct While walking across the street, she was hit by a bus. OR
She was hit by a bus while walking across the street.Rule 2. Place modifiers near the words they modify.
Incorrect I have some pound cake Mollie baked in my lunch bag.
Correct In my lunch bag, I have some pound cake that Mollie baked.
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